Allright I'm done! I don't know if I still need this, but just in case:
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Luke/Ben: Their plotline was definately interesting, although I'm getting a little tired of Force-philosophy. However I do like how the Jedi phsychosis is getting more enigmatic. And this leads me to...
Chapter 22: It was very cool to see these characters again, but it left me pretty confused. Anakin lived happily ever after (okay I got that), Jacen didn't (Well, that sucks...) and Mara is half and half (what the heck?!). I always thought that Force-User-wise you became one with the Force or you didn't depending on your choice (Light or Dark) and there's no in between. I know it's been blurred by books like Traitor, but I don't see any reason Mara should be suffering, she made her choice (Light) and that should be that.
Mandos: I for one was surprised these guys showed up, although Denning portrayed them nastily as usual. The part where the two Mandos escape with their X-Ray thing and the others stay behind was handled in a very biased way. If it were the Jedi, Denning would say the group was heroic, staying behind while the others escaped. I wonder if Boba Fett or Mirta will show up?
Jain/Jag: I hate to say it, but I see rough waters ahead...
Sith: I enjoyed them for the most part, except for the last few chapters. The part where the elevator opens and Luke stabs one and shoots the other was ridiculous. How could a Sith be that dumb. They were getting cut down left and right...
Han/Leia/Allana: These were probably my favourite scenes. It's nice to see them just being a normal (for the most part) family.
So, overall, I enjoyed it, but there is definately room for improvement.
Where sky and water meet,
Where the waves grow sweet,
Doubt not, Reepicheep,
To find all you seek,
There is the utter east.