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The Lost Story Of the Clone Wars, Part 1
 PostPosted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 10:01 pm Reply with quote  
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  Darth Bane
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Rise of the Empire era

A fan-fic by Darth Bane


There were thousands of them. Each one, one and the same. I couldn't tell them apart. The only difference between any one of them, was the yellow commander marking on their "Head." Only about ten of them had it.
A sith lord, Count Dooku to be exact, was leading them into battle. Thousands of them, hundreds of us. Mace Windu and Master Yoda, the most powerful Jedi in the galaxy, led the me and the rest of the clones into battle against the droids.
"Get Down!" Rex yelled just as a B-2 Battle Droid whipped a thermal detonator at me. I didn't know he was yelling to me, so I didn't know about it until it had hit me. When the detonator had hit me, I didn't know what had just hit me. When I realized what it was, I threw the detonator in the other direction and as the battle droid exploded, then I felt like it was just me on the battlefield.
I fired on the battle droids like there was no tomorrow. I was shot in the arm. Then it came in the leg. I collapsed to the ground.
I had to crawl back to our base. This could take awhile. I thought to myself. I could feel blood running down my leg. Battle droids were starting to advance. I had to crawl as fast as I could.
Two B-2 Battle Droids grabbed me by the leg. My guess is that they think I have some secret Republic battle plans. "Ahhh!" I yelled as loud as I could. "Help!" Then I blacked out.


To Be Continued...
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 PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:07 pm Reply with quote  
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In the films or the Eu, has anyone actually mentioned blood? It seems kind of unheard of, doesn't it?
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 PostPosted: Thu Nov 22, 2012 2:55 am Reply with quote  
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Films: Darth Maul spilled a little blood when he was cut in two by Obi-Wan, in A New Hope that Aqualish that lost his hand in the cantina to Obi-Wan spilled blood.

EU: TCW episode when Cad Bane is hurt, he drips some of his green blood on the floor of the LAAT,....

So yes, out of hundred of thousands that had died in the SW universe, I can think of at least three. Laughing

But than again, only Banes was actually mentioned Confused


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I'm sorry, Jason. Do you have a problem with me getting into detail?
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 PostPosted: Wed Feb 20, 2013 7:43 pm Reply with quote  
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No problem. I just feel that I can speak of what I know from the saga without being ridiculed.
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Did I ever say that you couldn't speak your mind? I don't recall.
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 PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:32 am Reply with quote  
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Easy now, people. Let's keep it friendly. There's nothing wrong with constructive criticism, so let's just move on.
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Darth Skuldren wrote:
Easy now, people. Let's keep it friendly. There's nothing wrong with constructive criticism, so let's just move on.


No offense, Darth Skuldren, but I don't like his criticism. I don't feel that it has been all that constructive, more negativity.
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Darth Bane wrote:
Darth Skuldren wrote:
Easy now, people. Let's keep it friendly. There's nothing wrong with constructive criticism, so let's just move on.


No offense, Darth Skuldren, but I don't like his criticism. I don't feel that it has been all that constructive, more negativity.


No no no. I think that Skuldren's right. You shouldn't write these fan-fics if you can't take a little comments and reviews from the people who read it.
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I hope you realize what it is you have done today. Look to this emoticon to figure out what has happened.



Get ready for the debates of your life.
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These are the only words that I have for you: I'm ready when you are!
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Ok

So I've unlocked the thread so Bane can continue on his story. I'm leaving the earlier exchange up not to add to feelings, but as a reminder that differences of opinion can and WILL happen- but no one should be flaming or trolling each other. My hope here is that you two will engage in FRIENDLY debates, explore each others views or try and sway each other.

Remember EUCantina is to be a FUN friendly place.


As for blood- yes many stories have dealt with blood- some sabers fights even- not all wounds have been cauterized by the blade- there in fact have been cases where the blade left a bleeding wound.

My advice is this; when reading a post that gets your pulse racing- STOP re read it in a less hostile tone- try one more fun-joking and see if the message still crosses you. I have found more often than not I am misinterpreting tone.

I expect from here out all posts in this thread to be about Bane's story and his story alone.

Thanks and remember; the Force is with us.


EDIT: And Bane- I'll come back and edit all these posts out of the thread in the future so your story can flow- I'm leaving them for a while so the message can sink in before it's been removed.
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Yes, bane please continue your story i liked it and want to hear more!
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