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The New Jedi Order: Relentless
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Star Wars: The New Jedi Order: Relentless

By illogicalRogue2 (please note this is the first time I've posted my FanFic anywhere, it's part of a larger story, one I've been working on for quite a while, but only fleetingly The last part I've decided to share has part that NJO fans may recognize from Vector Prime.)


Feedback welcome!!

(Also! Note that the format changed in crossover too Sad I've lost the bold and italic for now. And I've got some chapters still that need replaced over all. This is the rough draft of a part of the over all story.)


New Cast:


    Reece Denzar - Male - Corellian - latest Captain of the SPICY LADY. Struggling to make ends meet.


    Kall’el - Male - Stenax - Reece’s current Partner - Jedi Knight (Jedi Wanderer) – Gargoyle like being- he has wings that fold like a cloak to keep out of his way and so they are not cumbersome in crampt spaces. Kall'el is one of the few Stenax to leave his homeworld. And most likely the only one to ever become a Jedi.


    Zorrom Nadda - Male - Ithorian - Jedi Master Graduated from Skywalker’s 3rd graduating class. one of the few Priest / healers of the Order and Lan Pal Halloran’s Master.

    Lan-Pal Halloran - Male – Human / near human – Padawan


    Maleko Gunn - Male – Codru-Ji– Maleko was just a good humored drifter until Kyp Durron ran across him and sent him to study at the Temple on Yavin 4. Like all adult Codru-Ji he has four arms which he uses to his advantage in combat wielding four sabers.








Set just before the events of Vector Prime......
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PROLOGUE

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CHAPTER ONE

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CHAPTER TWO

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CHAPTER THREE
**(Next to have italics added*)

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CHAPTER FOUR

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CHAPTER FIVE


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CHAPTER SIX

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CHAPTER SEVEN

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CHAPTER EIGHT


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CHAPTER NINE

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CHAPTER FIFTEEN

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*Knocks on the screen* Erm, Rogue? There was a six chapter jump there Confused

Will read this later. Looking forward to it!
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Life Is The Path wrote:
*Knocks on the screen* Erm, Rogue? There was a six chapter jump there Confused

Will read this later. Looking forward to it!


Yeah The part between those I've not written down- I know where they are going. And have arced the characters and the "series" arch villain out a ways, but had stopped writing for a long while. I've gotten to this point and now have to decide what to work on next- connecting 9 to 15 or the other bits that I have that I've not posted here yet.

I had so much story in my head that I was in a rush to write down the scenes as they played in my mind. So I've got like 22 over side story plots that bridge out through out the entire 5 year NJO war. But I've not sat down until recently to put it all back together as it was in my head at the time. (Luckily I took a lot of notes. Laughing )

Though I've taken far too much time off from this little project. Wink
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Well, for my money, I'd like to see parts 10-14 before I read 15. That's just me, though!

Hmm, I'm liking it so far, Rogue!
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