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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 12:15 pm Reply with quote  
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  Darth Skuldren
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I've been working on this sci-fi story for a while and I could use a volunteer (ie. FREE!) editor to take a look at it. Beyond the grammatical errors, I would be looking for helpful feedback and suggestions.

If anyone's interested, let me know and I can email you the story.

Also, if anyone else is looking for editors, feel free to utilize this thread. Cool
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 PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 12:35 pm Reply with quote  
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  Old Master Ben
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I volunteer Skuldren. I love grammar, and writing in general. Smile


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 PostPosted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:19 pm Reply with quote  
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I can do it Skuldren. Go ahead, I'm curious to read it anyway Smile
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 PostPosted: Fri May 14, 2010 2:02 pm Reply with quote  
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  Darth Skuldren
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Well for anyone whose interested, I posted Part One of my story Dirt Tripper in the Creative Works. If you want, you can post comments here.

This is my first attempt to write a long, full length story that is free from Star Wars. I've been spending a long time on it, slowly pouring more and more into it as the feeling hits me. I think it's coming along pretty good as I'm now seeing the end in sight and I know how I'm going to get there, finally. For a while there, I wasn't sure how to wrap things up as I already knew how I wanted things to end, I just wasn't sure how it would escalate to that point.

Of course, there's always the possibility that the end might change. It's certainly not set in stone. I always like to dive into my characters' heads and see where it takes me. However, I think I know how this one is going to go. Cool
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